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OKAY. So. Fantatsic job, first of all, as has been pointed out. Your proportions here are excellent, especially in regards to head/neck, neck/torso, arms/torso, and torso/waist. You are really getting the hang of this!
Especially want to compliment you on remembering the ribcage beneath the skin. Now she's not just a flat drawing...she has an actual figure. A figure that makes sense and isn't all anorexic curves.
Good job remembering the collarbone, AND remembering how it connects to the shoulders. You've been taking my advice, good girl.
Arms are very nice and look to be just the right length, so good job. The right one (her left) looks a little too thin where it meets the shoulder, so I would bulk that up a little, but all things considered they work out well. Although that girl needs a little more muscle (not that I'm one to lecture; my arms lack anything related to muscle also
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Everything on the face is nicely proportioned, and the proportions to the neck are nice too. This note is nitpicky, but just remember: necks aren't complete curves, so they'll have some 'straighter' lines too. Like I said, nitpicky, and not the first detail you need to worry about really.
You actually have tapered the torso into the waist very nicely here. That looks accurate too, especially considering the sudden lack of ribcage down in one's abdomen. From what I can see of the waist it's starting to look very nice too. Remember that women typically have an hourglass figure--rounded chest and hips, narrowed waist (as opposed to the traditional male-triangle figure, with broad shoulders that taper to a narrower body). And just try drawing the hips out, through observation if necessary. The more you practice, the better you get.
The only thing that's slightly awkward is the bra and chest. The placement proportions-wise is actually pretty good, so I think it's more a matter of distance and perspective that's the problem. The straps hooking over the shoulders are widest at the shoulders, and narrowest at the cup--but considering that's actually the closest point to you, it should be the opposite, widest there and narrowest at the shoulderline. Remember the golden rule of perspective: the closer it is to you, the bigger it gets.
Very nice job overall. This is a vast improvement compared to some of your previous stuff, so feel proud of yourself
~Karma
Especially want to compliment you on remembering the ribcage beneath the skin. Now she's not just a flat drawing...she has an actual figure. A figure that makes sense and isn't all anorexic curves.
Good job remembering the collarbone, AND remembering how it connects to the shoulders. You've been taking my advice, good girl.
Arms are very nice and look to be just the right length, so good job. The right one (her left) looks a little too thin where it meets the shoulder, so I would bulk that up a little, but all things considered they work out well. Although that girl needs a little more muscle (not that I'm one to lecture; my arms lack anything related to muscle also
)Everything on the face is nicely proportioned, and the proportions to the neck are nice too. This note is nitpicky, but just remember: necks aren't complete curves, so they'll have some 'straighter' lines too. Like I said, nitpicky, and not the first detail you need to worry about really.
You actually have tapered the torso into the waist very nicely here. That looks accurate too, especially considering the sudden lack of ribcage down in one's abdomen. From what I can see of the waist it's starting to look very nice too. Remember that women typically have an hourglass figure--rounded chest and hips, narrowed waist (as opposed to the traditional male-triangle figure, with broad shoulders that taper to a narrower body). And just try drawing the hips out, through observation if necessary. The more you practice, the better you get.
The only thing that's slightly awkward is the bra and chest. The placement proportions-wise is actually pretty good, so I think it's more a matter of distance and perspective that's the problem. The straps hooking over the shoulders are widest at the shoulders, and narrowest at the cup--but considering that's actually the closest point to you, it should be the opposite, widest there and narrowest at the shoulderline. Remember the golden rule of perspective: the closer it is to you, the bigger it gets.
Very nice job overall. This is a vast improvement compared to some of your previous stuff, so feel proud of yourself
~Karma